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### Chapter Five: The Hospital
The emergency room receptionist looked up as I entered.
“Can I help you?”
I paused. “I’m looking for… a friend who might have come in earlier.”
She typed something into her computer, then shook her head. “No one by that name here today.”
That’s when I saw it — another note, this one taped to the back of a vending machine in the waiting area.
**“You’re nearly there. One last test. Go home. Go alone.”**
That was it.
No riddles. No more clues.
Just: go home.
I raced back to the house, heart hammering. It was 8:36 p.m.
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### Chapter Six: The Truth at Home
The house was dark.
I opened the door slowly, calling out again — nothing.
But something had changed. A faint sound upstairs. A soft creak.
I crept up the steps.
Mia’s door was ajar.
Inside, sitting on the bed, were Emily and Mia — safe. Unharmed. Smiling.
I froze.
“What—?”
Emily stood and held out a small device — a camcorder.
“You passed,” she said.
I blinked. “Passed what?”
She walked over, taking my hand. “The test. For months, you’ve been distant. Always at work. Always tired. Mia barely sees you. I needed to know you’d still fight for us if it came to it.”
My head spun. “This… was all a setup?”
Emily nodded. “The clues. The notes. I planted them. I even got the school to help with the lunchbox.”
Mia ran over and hugged my legs. “You found us, Daddy.”
I knelt down, pulling her close. “Of course I did.”
But even as I held her, something didn’t sit right.
In the corner of Mia’s room, half-hidden behind her toy chest, was a shadow. A figure.
When I turned to look again, it was gone.
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### Chapter Seven: The Final Revelation
Later that night, after Mia went to bed, Emily and I sat on the porch.
“I get why you did it,” I said quietly. “But… it was cruel.”
“I was desperate,” she whispered. “We were slipping away.”
I looked at her. “Emily… did you really do all of it?”
She blinked. “What do you mean?”
I pulled the first note from my pocket — the one from the lunchbox.
She looked at it — and frowned.
“That’s not mine,” she said.
I stared at her, ice running through my veins.
And from inside the house… a soft creak on the stairs.
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**\[To Be Continued…]**
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